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Hanna Waters's avatar

“Bottling the air of late stage capitalism” — so apt. Loved this. The mall always makes me feel worse about myself, even as its edifice is crumbling. Hyper real.

Hanna Waters's avatar

With that said though, I think you should make good on your experiment and go write at the mall. It could be really good. Could suck the soul right out of you. Two decent prompts await!

Theory Gang's avatar

Exactly. Either way, you're right.

Ali Griffin Vingiano's avatar

Loved this one

Pranjal Saxena's avatar

Sometimes I go at these big huge places that humans made and I feel alone, along with million other emotions. One of the thought is : Maybe I should write a story about it"

Reading this post is almost like that.